I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Adriaan.Your blog was set out well and easy to read.I like that you used a white background for the blue and green text as I think it would of been harder to read if you hadn't done that.Just remember that you need to use punctuation in your writing.Capital letters are needed at the start of a sentence and full stops go at the end.Have a great Sunday, the last day of the school holidays.
Hello Adriaan.Your blog was set out well and easy to read.I like that you used a white background for the blue and green text as I think it would of been harder to read if you hadn't done that.Just remember that you need to use punctuation in your writing.Capital letters are needed at the start of a sentence and full stops go at the end.Have a great Sunday, the last day of the school holidays.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for reading my blog. Thank you for telling me about my punctuation. I will work on it.
Adriaan.