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Monday, July 29, 2019

Hotspot Week 1

Hi guys
I  have been writing with my class about  this picture. I had to write about what I could hear I see and feel.





Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’

1.The thunder growled after the lightning  bolts.

2.The stormy water was blue and scary

 3.The clouds are dark black and blue, the same colour as the water.
4.The thunder sounds angry
5.The  clouds Rumbled  dark in the storm.   


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Tuesday, July 2, 2019

My Writing


Hi guys
For Writing we have been  writing about descriptive stories.  We use our 5 senses in our  writing . things like touch, smell, see, hear, and taste..
We have been describing a picture for our writing.
We have been changing our I sentences to a the sentence.

Here is my work


Early in the morning I went into the frosty cold field.  I stood in the middle and saw the sunrise.
I can walk on the freezing cold grass.

I can change it to...
The freezing cold grass crunches as you walk to the sunlight.


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WEEKLY WORDS

Hi boys and girls

I am going  to tell  you about my  weekly words
I have to write about the weekly word.

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