Hi guys
For Writing we have been writing about descriptive stories. We use our 5 senses in our writing . things like touch, smell, see, hear, and taste..
We have been describing a picture for our writing.
We have been changing our I sentences to a the sentence.
Here is my work
Early in the morning I went into the frosty cold field. I stood in the middle and saw the sunrise.
I can walk on the freezing cold grass.
I can change it to...
The freezing cold grass crunches as you walk to the sunlight.
Thank you for reading my blog.
I can walk on the freezing cold grass.
I can change it to...
The freezing cold grass crunches as you walk to the sunlight.
Thank you for reading my blog.
Hello Adriaan.
ReplyDeleteI like the picture you have chosen. I LOVE walking in places like this. I like the sun as it's rising above the trees and the snow on the ground.
I like the words you have used to describe your picture. Well done.
Keep up the great work.