Kia ora
I am sharing my writing.
We have been learning to write about the mountain video. We have also been learning to know what language features are and how to use them
This video is about winter. I am sharing this with you because it show language features and I had to write about it.
Here is my writing:
The snow was running and the snow Full length dancing
The snow was dancing In the cloud Endian First snow Fell down from the Sky Andean splattered On the ground everywhere In the whole universe
The snow was running I weigh To be excellent And then The snow fell off the cloud And then made snow
The tree is dancing in the chilly wind.
Snow - cold,-excitement -sadness (blue)
Winter -
Cold - shiver comes against my body with Sadness.
Thank you for reading my blog. Please leave a comment.
No comments:
Post a Comment